i work in PR and i loooove watching these speeches. it's so... obvious... that they've hired people like me to scrub the language, build the patriotic metaphors.
I thought "Help is on the way" was okay but a little off. He needed something that will also get people energized and to the polls, and telling them that you'll help them doesn't make them want to get off their couches and do something, you know?
what wouldn't i have done though? those "america can do better" signs. sheesh. looking at the crowd it says "KERRY" "America can Do Better." "KERRY" I'm not sure that's the messaging you want on the screen... :roll: