Originally posted by Charlie Nakatestes, Japanese Golfer:
How about "One More Song the Radio Won't Like"?
...well yeah, maybe because it SUCKS. Stop whining and write a good song, damnit.
you don't want to let this die, do you? i just did some reading, and for a girl in her early 20s, not even close to stardom, i don't think this is a shitty song at all ... now if it was on her second album, i might have some issues ... definitely not my favorite on the album though
this is by the very minimum of standards a "good country song", i would consider it "very very good":
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Copper on the corner and he loaded two rounds
And I canâ??t even cross the line to talk you down
Peter, sweet baby, whereâ??d you get that gun?
You spend half your life trying to turn the other half around
And I tried to come clean, but I guess itâ??s no use
Your face is all over six oâ??clock news
They cleared the street and then they closed the schools
I canâ??t even get inside
Did you lose your head when the farm went down?
Was it when your daddy died after he moved to town
And I know your momma calls you good for noth
She says her baby is a failer and she donâ??t want you calling
[chorus]
Peter, sweet baby, thereâ??s just something that I ought to say to you
I'm gonna have your baby this coming June
We could get a little place down by Gilmour Park
You could do a little time and save my broken heart
[chorus]
I tried to come clean but I guess it's no use
Copper went ahead and he just shot you through
Now youâ??re lying dead on the avenue
And I canâ??t feel my broken heart (x2)